Copywriting

Not a good email

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Today is the last day of my promo for Lawrence Bernstein’s Lead Gen Legend. My promo ends at midnight tonight.

There was some confusion about the deadline because some people interpret “12 midnight Sunday” to be the first minute of Sunday, rather than the last.

Well, that’s not how I interpret it or have interpreted it, ever. If you want proof, take a look at all my previous promos that end at 12 midnight of day x. I always take that to mean the end of day x, rather than the very beginning.

Still, this is something I will fix going forward, by removing any ambiguity, and ending future promos at 11:59pm.

So far, a healthy number of people have bought this offer, including a reader named Mike, who bought via yesterday’s 4th-of-July, “All experience hath shewn” email.

After buying, Mike wrote me to say:

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Thanks John!

I just bought this. I’m assuming you will need the receipt to get access to your bonuses, so I have attached it.

I also sense that today’s email will go into your bonus of Emails that did well!

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If you have bought Lead Gen Legend during this promo, no need to send me your receipt.

I will get that info from Lawrence. Just bear with me, because I am delivering the bonuses by hand, and over the past 36 hours, a bunch of people have bought. I will batch all the bonus-delivery into one gruesome task, and will do it as soon as the promo ends.

As for Mike’s comment that yesterday’s email is going into “Emails that did well,” that’s in reference to one of the bonuses I am giving away with this offer, an ever-expanding swipe file of my own outstanding emails.

Yesterday’s email will NOT be going into that swipe file.

Yesterday’s email yesterday was thoughtful, clever, and seemingly persuasive, if I do honk my own honker myself. And yes, yesterday’s email did drive in some sales (Mike’s included). But yesterday’s email underperformed relative to other emails I sent during this promo.

It all goes to support my point that, unless you know the behind-the-scenes results, it’s impossible to evaluate copy as good or not, or to know that you are modeling something that actually worked.

Cue Lawrence’s Lead Gen Legend.

Lead Gen Legend is a massive, searchable collection of winning lead gen advertising.

With direct response ads, you can use a proxy for secret and hidden behind-the-scenes results. That proxy is whether an ad was run hundreds of thousands of times over the span of months, years or decades.

This tracking of winning ads is what Lawrence has been doing, patiently, obsessively, over his career.

In addition to which, Lawrence has a long tenure in the DR industry. He has a ton of insider contacts. He has worked with many ultra-successful direct response businesses.

Lawrence knows more behind-the-scenes direct response stuff than both you and me combined, and he shares some of that as commentary and context inside Lead Gen Legend.

In addition to that addition, I am also offering the following free bonuses if you get Lawrence’s Lead Gen Legend by the end of day today, Sunday:

FREE BONUS #1. “Emails that did well”

I’ll give you access to my “Emails that did well” document, now and in perpetuity. You can see which of my past emails did well and why. And as I update the document, you will see which future emails have done well. In a way, it’s a swipe file of outstanding email copy, from, as former Agora Financial copy chief Joe Schriefer has said, “one of the best email writers out there.”

FREE BONUS #2. “Core Promise Workshop and Q&A call” recording

I recently sold this workshop recording for $97, along with some bonuses. It’s yours free (minus the bonuses) if you get Lawrence’s Lead Gen Legend.

FREE BONUS #3. “Perfect Lead Gen Offer”

Not my idea. Also not a specific offer template you can swipe. Rather, a simple but counterintuitive process for figuring out what offer to make in your lead gen ads to maximize lifetime value and minimize ad costs.

FREE BONUS #4. “How to get copywriting clients a dozen at a time”

A recording of of the call I did with Dawn Apuan, grilling her on how she has been able to become the resident copywriting guru in multiple business masterminds, and rake in dozens of clients at a time.

FREE BONUS #5. A lazy, ‘mom & pop’ ad template to add 3-4 buyers to your email list every day, at a slight profit”

Nick Bandy’s lazy but effective way of creating ads to get people to buy his low-ticket front-end offer and get on his email list.

This is part of Nick’s $500 training on running a low-ticket funnel, but it’s just as applicable if all you wanna do is run lead gen ads.

It’s yours free as part of this Lead Gen Offer, though you will have to additionally opt in to Nick’s list to get it.

FREE BONUS #6. “The second coming of Gary Bencivenga” ad and landing page

A few months ago, I found a guy who was running an ad on Facebook… telling you he will write an ad to beat your best performing ad… and if he doesn’t succeed in beating it, he’ll give you all your money back.

The offer started at $97 and has been going up each time he sells out the slots he’s got for the month. It currently sells for $247. It was a brilliant, modern application of the classic Gary Bencivenga agency ad.

I’m planning to model this same approach to get advertorial clients. If you’d like the ad and the landing page copy, they are yours as part of this bonus bundle.

Again, these bonuses disappear tonight, Sunday, at end of day, which I tend to call midnight. If you would like to get them before then, and also benefit from the generous $300 discount Lawrence is offering during this promo, here’s where to go:

https://bejakovic.com/leadgen

P.S. To get $300 off the regular $379 price of Lead Gen Legend, put in the coupon code BEJAKO on the cart page. Lawrence has these instructions on the page itself, but it’s a bit hidden, and some people have written me in confusion about it.

How one copywriter gets clients a dozen at a time

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Back in March, I put out a call among the successful copywriters I know, asking if they have some sexy new way to get copywriting clients.

One of the people who replied was Dawn Apuan, the owner of Copy Queens Ink. Dawn wrote:

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The strategy that’s worked the best for me over the years and brought in multiple six figures is getting paid to get clients by being the resident copy “guru” for a coaching program or mastermind.

The coach pays me monthly to do calls and/or provide feedback for clients (the exact deliverables depend on the coach). The clients get a TON of value and then inevitably some hire me to do it for them or work with them in some capacity.

I’ve never heard anyone talk about this strategy? I’m sure others do it and I may just not be aware of it but it’s been fun and extremely lucrative for me.

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Harumph. That was my initial reaction.

Not that I doubt that being the resident copywriting guru in a mastermind will get you clients. I lucked into one such situation 5 years ago, and I got the easiest, most generous deals with some of the biggest clients I’ve ever had that way.

But still, harrrrumph.

If getting copywriting clients is a hurdle, Dawn’s approach just seemed to replace it with a significantly bigger hurdle, which is to locate business masterminds, somehow connect with the owners, and get those owners to then endorse you to all their members.

I mean, the one time it happened to me, it seemed to be completely random and unrepeatable.

Except…

For Dawn, becoming the resident copywriting guru has been neither random nor unrepeatable.

She has done it consciously, a half dozen times or more, using straightforward strategies that pretty much anyone can replicate.

Dawn and I got on a call. I wanted to grill her about how she became the resident copywriting guru inside a business mastermind a half dozen times.

Dawn obliged.

We recorded the call, with a view to maybe using it in the future in some unspecified way.

Well, the time has come.

I am currently promoting Lawrence Bernstein’s Lead Gen Legend, a giant swipe file of winning lead gen copy.

I asked Dawn if I could share the video we recorded, in which she lays out her secrets, as a bonus for my promo, as long as the people who got it would also get on her list. Dawn agreed.

So that is now the first of three new, additional bonuses I am including with this offer, bonuses which will vanish tomorrow night, Sunday, at 12 midnight PST.

The total offer now stands as:

====>>> Lead Gen Legend <<<====

… which brings together hundreds of winning lead gen ads across 58 industries, plus Lawrence’s expert commentary and context, at $300 off the usual price.

FREE BONUS #1. Emails that did well

I’ll give you access to my “Emails that did well” document, now and in perpetuity. You can see which of my past emails did well and why. And as I update the document, you will see which future emails have done well. In a way, it’s a swipe file of outstanding email copy, from, as former Agora Financial copy chief Joe Schriefer has said, “one of the best email writers out there.”

FREE BONUS #2. Core Promise Workshop and Q&A call recording

I recently sold this workshop recording for $97, along with some bonuses. It’s yours free (minus the bonuses) if you get Lawrence’s Lead Gen Legend.

FREE BONUS #3. “Perfect Lead Gen Offer”

Not my idea. Also not a specific offer template you can swipe. Rather, a simple but counterintuitive process for figuring out what offer to make in your lead gen ads to maximize lifetime value and minimize ad costs.

FREE BONUS #4. “How to get copywriting clients a dozen at a time”

A recording of of the call I did with Dawn Apuan, grilling her on how she has been able to become the resident copywriting guru in multiple business masterminds, and rake in dozens of clients at a time.

FREE BONUS #5. A lazy, ‘mom & pop’ ad template to add 3-4 buyers to your email list every day, at a slight profit”

Nick Bandy’s lazy but effective way of creating ads to get people to buy his low-ticket front-end offer and get on his email list.

This is part of Nick’s $500 training on running a low-ticket funnel, but it’s just as applicable if all you wanna do is run lead gen ads.

It’s yours free as part of this Lead Gen Offer, though you will have to additionally opt in to Nick’s list to get it.

FREE BONUS #6. “The second coming of Gary Bencivenga” ad and landing page

A few months ago, I found a guy who was running an ad on Facebook… telling you he will write an ad to beat your best performing ad… and if he doesn’t succeed in beating it, he’ll give you all your money back.

The offer started at $97 and has been going up each time he sells out the slots he’s got for the month. It currently sells for $247. It was a brilliant, modern application of the classic Gary Bencivenga agency ad.

I’m planning to model this same approach to get advertorial clients. If you’d like the ad and the landing page copy, they are yours as part of this bonus bundle.

Again, these bonuses disappear tomorrow, Sunday, at 12 midnight PST. If you would like to get them before then, and also benefit from the generous $300 discount Lawrence is offering during this promo, here’s where to go:

https://bejakovic.com/leadgen

P.S. To get $300 off the regular $379 price of Lead Gen Legend, put in the coupon code BEJAKO on the cart page. Lawrence has these instructions on the page itself, but it’s a bit hidden, and some people have written me in confusion about it.

All experience hath shewn

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For the past year, I’ve been memorizing, one line a day, various famous poems and speeches and passages.

At some point, I memorized the preamble to the Declaration of Independence.

You probably know the “all men are created equal” and the “life, liberty, and the pursuit of hamburgers” bits.

But have you ever noticed the following piece of psychological insight in the nation’s founding document?

“All experience hath shewn, that mankind are more disposed to suffer, while evils are sufferable, than to right themselves by abolishing the forms to which they are accustomed.”

In short, that passage says that people prefer the status quo to just about anything else, regardless of how bad the status quo is.

That might seem like a trivial observation.

It is not. It reminded me of an issue of the Gary Halbert Letter (another founding document of the great American experiment), in which Gary asks what the three following situations, all very different from each other, all have in common:

1. “A guy buys a beer joint that’s doing a good business in a blue collar neighborhood. His first move is to decorate the joint and give it a little class and to lower his prices.” Result: He loses most of his customers.

2. “A guy who has never broken 100 is shooting a round of golf. After the first 9 holes, he notices he’s doing exceptionally well and has only used up 36 strokes. And, if he keeps this up for the next 9 holes, he’ll shoot par for the first time in his life.” He finishes the course with 103 strokes.

3. A wealthy Cuban businessman has all his wealth confiscated by the Castro regime. He moves to Miami with nothing. Within a short time, he’s rich again.

Says Gary, what these situations all have in common is a primary human driver, even more powerful than sex, greed, and curiosity. That primary human driver is the need to stick with the status quo.

I don’t know about you, but I personally cling to the status quo while also fighting against it daily. It’s hard work, but what else is there?

Anyways, my point today was just to share that line from the Declaration of Independence of you, because it is great, and because it’s been playing in my head for the past year.

It speaks to a fundamental human truth, as relevant today as it was then, as prevalent in politics as it is in business.

Speaking of business… business needs to be done now.

I am currently promoting Lawrence Bernstein’s Lead Gen Legend, a giant swipe file of massively successful lead gen copy, with examples from right now all the way back to revolutionary times (ok, maybe not, but pretty close).

If you need a way to tie Lead Gen Legend into the topic of today’s email, go back to the status quo thing.

We all have our own routine and limited ideas for writing copy and making sales appeals. But status quo inputs beget status quo results.

It takes an outside impetus to push us out of that status quo, and to open up new vistas of conversion and profit. A curated swipe file of winning ads can be just the thing. Gary Halbert would agree.

If you are mildly convinced by that argument, I will warm you up a bit more by including several bonuses with Lead Gen Legend, if you get it before tomorrow, Sunday, July 5 at 12 midnight PST.

The ones I’ve announced so far:

FREE BONUS #1. Emails that did well

I’ll give you access to my “Emails that did well” document, now and in perpetuity. You can see which of my past emails did well and why. And as I update the document, you will see which future emails have done well. In a way, it’s a swipe file of outstanding email copy, from, as former Agora Financial copy chief Joe Schriefer has said, “one of the best email writers out there.”

FREE BONUS #2. Core Promise Workshop and Q&A call recording

I recently sold this workshop recording for $97, along with some bonuses. It’s yours free (minus the bonuses) if you get Lawrence’s Lead Gen Legend.

FREE BONUS #3. “Perfect Lead Gen Offer”

Not my idea. Also not a specific offer template you can swipe. Rather, a simple but counterintuitive process for figuring out what offer to make in your lead gen ads to maximize lifetime value and minimize ad costs.

Again, my bonuses are good only until tomorrow, Sunday, at 12 midnight PST.

Lawrence has also generously agreed to lower the price of Lead Gen Legend during this promo by $300 from its usual $379 price, so it is now a very attractive $79.

If you’d like to get it before it becomes necessary for me to dissolve this offer:

https://bejakovic.com/leadgen

The 100% Headline Swipe (Raking in Response for 75 Years)

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This week, I’m promoting Lawrence Bernstein’s Lead Gen Legend offer, a giant collection of winning lead gen ads, searchable by category, along with expert commentary and context by Lawrence himself.

I’m also throwing in some exclusive bonuses, one of which is “Emails that did well,” my own private list of emails I’ve written (and will write) that have stood out (and will stand out) in terms of results.

Because all emails are NOT created equal.

And unless you know the behind-the-scenes results, there’s no way for you to know which emails pulled in pulled in 2x-3x the sales of others.

In other words, if you’re swiping, you might be swiping the wrong thing.

Speaking of, when I started to promote Lead Gen Legend, Lawrence sent me one particular email he had used to promote Lead Gen Legend to his own list.

Said Lawrence, “This was a rare, ridiculously successful email multiple times it was sent.”

I am reproducing Lawrence’s email below in full in order to:

1. Share a valuable marketing lesson (the promised “100% headline swipe” that’s been working for 75 years)

2. Give you an email to swipe if you wanna swipe something that was “rare” and “ridiculously successful” on the multiple times it was sent

2. Get you a bit warmer to the idea of grabbing Lead Gen Legend yourself, while my bonus offer and Lawrence’s generous discount are still live.

Play it again, Lawrence:

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How’s that for a cheesy subject line?

The cringe factor almost kept me from sending it.

But I’ll tell you something, …

If my head were on the chopping block and I had to come up with a winning lead in 60 seconds or less…

This 1952 vintage headline would be on my shortlist!

Raking in response for almost 75 years

This headline was so good Gene Schwartz reused it himself… the ad below evolved directly from the one above.

It’s been deployed in a dozen markets and it’s a longtime favorite of chiropractors.

Same setup, different market with over one thousand insertions for the 1965 book: “How to Avoid Probate.”

Geographically… demographically… psychographically...

There’s just no limit to how you can use this headline template.

From retirees in Florida… to chiropractors in Kansas… to gold investors in Singapore…

This headline beckons to them like a lighthouse in a sea of clutter.

The “Why hasn’t ‘Group X’ been told these facts?” template…

is a simple yet powerful way to target ideal prospects, suffering from a common problem.

And while Gene Schwartz used it to sell information, today it’s used almost exclusively for lead generation in health and wealth.

If there’s a better problem–agitation–solution setup, I haven’t seen it.

A favorite of chiropractors — this one had multiple full pages in the Chicago Tribune.

12,000+ ad insertions for this reverse mortgage ad (2016–2021)

If you were to read some of these earlier ads today, they might not feel like the most compelling copy on the planet.

And that’s a good thing because it proves just how universal this tested template really is.

It works for copy neophytes and veterans alike. And on that note:

For ​the next two days, you can round up 707 proven ideas ​for lead generation in any market… and take advantage of a $300 credit I’ve reserved for you.

Find it here: ​https://bejakovic.com/leadgen​

Yours for bolder response,

Lawrence (and John)

P.S. While almost nothing is 100%, this offer may be as close as it gets.

On average I write 3.4 good emails a month

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Over the past 8 years of running this daily newsletter, I have had a long line of big-name direct marketers and A-list copywriters come and go as subscribers.

Along the way, many have had good things to say about my abilities as an email copywriter. My favorite is from Joe Schriefer, who at the time was the copy chief at Agora Financial, one of the biggest imprints at one of the biggest direct response publishers. Joe wrote me one time and said:

“Just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy reading your emails. I think you’re one of the best email writers out there!”

I’m telling you this to set up the following shocking and quite depressing fact:

Even though I write and send an email every day, I on average write only 3.4 good emails a month.

Here’s how I know:

Earlier this year, I finally did something I shoulda done on day 0 of starting this newsletter. I created a new Google Doc, and I named it “Emails that did well.”

Ever since, when an email stands out in terms of results — usually sales made, but sometimes for other reasons, like getting a lot of qualified leads, or opening an unexpected new door, or simply getting an unusual amount of engagement — I put it in this document, along with a short summary of the results that made me think the email did well.

Over the past 5 months, since the end of January, I have put 17 emails into the “Emails that did well” document. By my math, that works out to 3.4 emails a month. That’s barely over 10%.

What about the remaining ~90% of emails I write?

I reckon they are doing their work still, and are moving some of the people somewhat closer to the hole, as marketer Travis Sago likes to say.

Still, fewer than 10% of my emails appear to be outstanding in terms of their impact. (For the record, none of these “Emails that did well” is a “cart close, last call” email. “Cart close” emails work great, but for reasons other than the copy.)

Would you like to know which of my emails did well this year?

Would you like to have running access to the emails of mine that do well in the future, for as long as I keep writing this newsletter?

If you would, I’ll make you a deal:

I’m currently promoting Lawrence Bernstein’s Lead Gen Legend. This is a massive swipe file of winning lead gen copy and set of special reports on lead gen, which Lawrence normally sells for $379, but which he is making available for $79 during my promo, because that’s the deal I made with him.

I bought Lead Gen Legend myself earlier this because I was sold on it myself, without thinking to ever promote it as an affiliate.

I am promoting it now because I think it’s great, like everything else Lawrence sells, and a sweet deal at just $79.

At the same time, I’ve learned a bit or two during these 8 years of running my own newsletter.

That’s why I’m also including the following three bonuses to Lawrence’s core offer:

FREE BONUS #1. Emails that did well

I’ll give you access to my “Emails that did well” document, now and in perpetuity. You can see which of my past emails did well and why. And as I update the document, you will see which future emails have done well. In a way, it’s a swipe file of outstanding email copy, from, as Joe Schriefer would say, “one of the best email writers out there.”

FREE BONUS #2. Core Promise Workshop and Q&A call recording

I recently sold this workshop recording for $97, along with some bonuses. It’s yours free (minus the bonuses) if you get Lawrence’s Lead Gen Legend for $79.

FREE BONUS #3. “Perfect Lead Gen Offer”

Not my idea. Also not a specific offer template you can swipe. Rather, a simple but counterintuitive process for figuring out what offer to make in your lead gen ads to maximize lifetime value and minimize ad costs.

If you want it, or at a part of it, here’s where to go:

https://bejakovic.com/leadgen

P.S. To get $300 off the regular $379 price of Lead Gen Legend, put in the coupon code BEJAKO on the cart page. Lawrence has these instructions on the page itself, but it’s a bit hidden, and some people have written me in confusion about it.

Make this your hobby

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Yesterday I started promoting Lead Gen Legend, “the world’s most powerful lead gen library.”

Lead Gen Legend is a giant swipe file plus much other stuff of value, put out by Lawrence Bernstein.

I bought Lead Gen Legend myself when it first came out, with no thought of promoting it as an affiliate, simply because I was sold on the value of it myself.

I am promoting it now because I think it’s great, and because I think you can profit from it.

My email yesterday managed to convey this, and actually made sales from several forward-looking marketers. It also drew some questions, such as the following:

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Love the Lambo garage joke. You mentioned you’d address this in the next couple of days, but quick question now, is this library mostly historical context, or is it easy to swipe and adapt if I’m actively building out a cold email/digital agency list right now?

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Being myself an opportunity seeker, I am sympathetic to the search for things that are “easy to swipe and adapt.”

But the fact is, a swipe file is not a template library, where you just plug in the name of your offer and come out with a ready-made ad or email.

That happens to be the great value of a swipe file, particularly of historical, possibly forgotten ads.

Don’t take it from me. Take it from Dan Kennedy, at one point the highest-paid copywriter on planet Earth, and almost certainly the most knowledgeable direct marketer on said planet. Says Dan:

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I am an advocate of spending a lot of time looking backwards in order to go forwards, because the people that did it a decade ago or longer, everybody had to be better than we have to be now to get the results, because they didn’t have tools.

So the guy who managed to sell a $200 “get rich in real estate” course in 1923, what had to happen?

By the way, his process wasn’t much different than our process. Just he didn’t have any tools.

So he ran a lead generation ad and people wrote in or sent in a dollar or sent in four postage stamps in order to get his free report.

He then sent them his sales letter, and then they had to read, and then they had to get a postal money order, and not talk themselves out of it while they were getting a postal money order, and then they had to mail in the postal money order to a stranger they didn’t know from Adam’s house cat, and know they were gonna wait a month before they ever saw anything.

What that guy did was much harder than what we have to do today. He HAD to be better.

So there’s a good chance of discovering something he was doing that has been kind of lost through the years, that nobody feels compelled to do now, but if they added it to what they’re doing it would help their results considerably.

So I’m very big on going backwards in order to go forwards. So dredge up the old stuff. Make that your hobby if you’re serious about this thing.

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All that’s to say, Lead Gen Legend contains old stuff. It also contains new stuff. (I’ll give you an example of both in another email during this promo.)

One way or another though, new or old, you’ll have to play with these ads and ideas a bit, to spot stuff that has been lost on others, to make them pay for you.

Like Dan says, make this your hobby, at least if you’re serious about this marketing thing. And your results will improve considerably.

If you’d like to get Lead Gen Legend now, and profit from the experience and skill of generations of direct marketers who simply HAD to be better than anyone working today, so you can get results that your competition can only look at with envy and frustration, then here’s where to go to start your new hobby:

https://bejakovic.com/leadgen

Announcing: The world’s most powerful lead gen library

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Today I have a new offer for you.

It’s what in the business is called an “affiliate offer.”

Meaning, I didn’t create this offer. And yet here I am promoting it, and if you buy it, I will get a cut of the money you invest.

With that damaging admission out of the way, here are the key facts about this offer:

1. The offer is called Lead Gen Legend.

It is, according to its maker, “the world’s most powerful lead gen library.”

2. Lead Gen Legend is a Swipe File+.

Meaning, you get a lot of curated, proven ads, but you also get much other stuff of value (hence the ‘+’) that I’ll tell you about in a second.

3. A swipe file though? Who needs a swipe file??? Isn’t that so 2021?

Well, I need a swipe file. I actually bought Lead Gen Legend when it was first offered earlier this year, without any thought of promoting it as an affiliate.

I bought it because 1) I am a hoarder of direct response materials, 2) because the promise of “the world’s most powerful lead gen library” sounded too good to pass up, and 3) because this offer is put out by the world’s most obsessed ad archivist, Lawrence Bernstein, and after already buying a bunch of stuff from Lawrence, I am predisposed to buying whatever he puts out, because everything I’ve bought so far has been frankly great.

4. The “other stuff of value” I mentioned above comes in the form of Lawrence’s experience, obsessiveness, and knowledge.

Lead Gen Legend isn’t just a bunch of lead gen ads.

First off, these are ads that worked, often to the tune of millions of dollars, across dozens of industries like “Agency & Copywriting”… “Anti-Aging & Beauty”… “Real Estate Investing”… (and of course) Dental Implants.

Second, these are ads that are commentated upon by Lawrence, who fills in the historical context, highlights what’s most important.

5. Also included in the (+) are several custom reports Lawrence has prepared, including but not limited to:

• “The Affluent Buyer Model”

• “The Inertia Breaker”

• “Free Plus Shipping”

• “Catalogue of Killer Lead Gen from a $386 Billion Firm”

6. The price, the huge price that I get a huge cut of.

When I bought Lead Gen Legend myself, not thinking to ever promote it, it was selling for $79. Lawrence has since Martin Skhreli’ed the price up to $379. And why not?

Lawrence’s list is full of big-time direct response operators, people who are spending thousands or tens of thousands of dollars A DAY on lead gen. One good idea that they peel out of Lead Gen Legend could make them a 100x return on Lead Gen Legend by tomorrow.

Maybe you are at that level yourself, or maybe you are not there yet.

In any case, I’ve struck a deal with Lawrence so that, during this promo, the price if Lead Gen Legend drops a healthy $300 from its current $379, to a modest and quite manageable $79.

That’s my argument for Lead Gen Legend today.

I realized I probably haven’t convinced you yet.

After all, you might still legitimately be wondering how I am using this lead gen library myself, or if it’s simply sitting in my imaginary garage, along with my imaginary collection of hundreds of books, right behind my imaginary Lambo.

You might be wondering how you could possibly use Lead Gen Legend, given that you are a new in the business/too experienced/tall/short/a wine drinker/a beer drinker/a teetotaler, or are unique in your own magical way.

You might also be wondering why you should possibly act now, since I haven’t announced a deadline.

For all that and more, stay tuned. I’ll attempt to address it in my emails across the next day or two.

If, on the other hand, you happen to be a big-time direct response operator, or are angling to become one soon, and you want to take advantage of the world’s most powerful lead gen library today, before others get their greasy mitts on it, and profit before they can, while saving yourself $300 before the offer disappears, then here’s where to act now:

https://bejakovic.com/leadgen

Do you want a free advertorial for your ecom brand?

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This morning, I woke up, got onto terrace of my Airbnb in Bologna, and amid the sounds of chirping crickets and a rare scooter on the street, I opened up WhatsApp for the first time in 16 hours.

I had a message from a guy named Brandon, who owns an ecom company, which sells a very specific and niche product via very direct response advertising.

A few days ago, I sent Brandon some new ads, which I had written for him for free. That’s what Brandon’s message this morning was about:

“Very nice. The page is built, those ads have just been pushed into production”

The page Brandon is referring to is the advertorial page. That’s because last week, right before going on vacation, I also delivered Brandon a free advertorial, to bolt onto his existing funnel.

The deal is, I do the advertorial and the ads for free. If the resulting funnel succeeds in beating what he was doing before, Brandon pays me a small fraction of the revenue this new funnel will generate.

I made this offer last month to my list.

After I made that offer, I had a genuine A-list copywriter challenge me on offering sales copy for free.

“You don’t need to do anything for free,” the A-list copywriter said. “You have the experience and the skill and you can charge for it.”

That’s definitely true.

At the same time, I’ve done a lot of charging for copy in the past, aka “client” work. I was never crazy about it.

That’s why I’m testing out “investments” or “partnerships” like I’m doing with Brandon.

We both put up a small wager. If our shared bet pays off, we split the winnings in some way. If it doesn’t, we’ve both lost just our small and manageable wager.

It’s a different dynamic to client work, and so far I like it better.

That’s why my offer still stands.

If you have an ecom business, if you run ads, and if you are comfortable with direct-response copy, then I am offering to write you an advertorial. For free. I’ll do the ads too. Also very free. You just pay me a small share of the resulting revenue in case the funnel makes you money, after it makes you money.

If you are interested, reply to this email and we can talk more.

And if you know somebody who might be interested, forward them this email. They might be grateful to you, and I will be for sure. Thanks in advance.

Writing a novel is child’s play

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How do you write a novel?

According to Nobel-prize winning writer Harold Pinter, writing a novel is child’s play.

You just need a starting point, says Pinter. You look around and describe what you see. After that, it’s all downhill.

For example, if you happen to be in the middle of the 1974 movie Accident… which features a scene involving a middle-aged Oxford professor, his wife, and his two children, on a sunny Sunday afternoon in the yard of their countryside house… then you start with that.

As one of the characters in Accident (a cynical novel author) tells another (a naive student), you just describe what you see:

Middle-aged professor… wife… children… Sunday afternoon.

Except, says Pinter via his character in Accident, you can go further. (This is possibly where Pinter sweeps his Nobel-prize winning talent under the rug.)

For example, you can notice that the wife is pregnant.

You can spot subtle signs the professor is having an affair with a girl at Oxford.

You can even claim that he’s reached the age where he can’t keep his hands off girls at Oxford.

And there you go. That’s the start of your novel, or really, your screenplay, because that’s also what Accident is about.

Like I’ve written already, I’m in Bologna this entire week.

The reason is that there’s a movie festival going on, which shows curated old movies I’ve never heard of or seen before.

One of these movies is Accident, which was written by Pinter, and which I saw yesterday, in a sweltering hot theater, with a few hundred other movie nerds who were fanning themselves and wiping off their faces with handkerchiefs, and not out of sympathy for the philandering Oxford professor.

I don’t know why I started out by telling you about novels. The fact is, this email is about movies.

Movies movies movies.

I like ’em old, I like ’em young, I like ’em arty, I like em trashy and popular.

I’ve worked movies into my emails (Accident in this one)… into my books (The Sting in my 10 Commandments of Con Men etc), into my courses (Top Gun in Daily Email Fastlane), and into my offers (Harry Potter for my current promotional event).

Speaking of, today is the last day for my Hogwarts of Influence offer.

I came up with the the idea of Hogwarting this offer because in one of my most popular courses, Most Valuable Email, I already use a Harry Potter movie to make a point. Specifically, I make the comparison between the Most Valuable Email trick I teach inside that course to the Wingardium Leviosa spell from the Harry Potter movies:

“Just say the phrase — ‘make the ‘gar’ nice and long” — and with a swish and flick of your wrist, you can make any email rise into the air and levitate.”

The Hogwarts of Influence offer is disappearing later tonight, at the witching hour, 12 midnight PST.

If you want to find out all I’m including inside the various levels of this offer, before the movie runs out and the theater is locked up, here’s where to go:

https://bejakovic.com/core-promise-pwyw/

How one copywriter gets hired without making explicit offers

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It’s 8:52am as I write this, and I’m sitting on the terrace of my AirBnb in Bologna, where I arrived just last night.

Crickets are chirping in nearby trees, swallows are circling overhead, and the sun is rising in the cloudless sky.

It’s very pleasant on the terrace at the moment, though that will change soon. It’s supposed to get up to 36 degrees today, or 97 if you do Fahrenheit.

I’m trying to take advantage of the bit of day before the city turns into a furnace, so let me just share with you a reader experience with client-getting.

A while back, in my Daily Email House group, long-time reader Carlo Gargiulo, who works as a senior copywriter at Metodo Merenda, wrote about how he had moved his newsletter to Substack. I asked Carlo why he did that and how it went. He replied:

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I also chose Substack because I want to write purely informative emails. They’re actual articles designed to help readers apply what I’ve taught them.

At the core of these articles (emails) are always the principles you shared with me in Most Valuable Email.

Readers love learning and putting into practice tips to improve offers, copy, etc.

And the interesting thing is that—without making explicit offers—I receive emails from entrepreneurs who want to hire me to write emails, Facebook ads, and landing pages.

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Is it the magic of Most Valuable Email that gets entrepreneurs reaching out to hire Carlo without him even offering?

Is it the magic of Substack?

Is it some combination of the two?

I don’t know.

But if you are looking to get copywriting clients, and if you don’t like the dynamic of you pitching yourself, and the world ignoring you, then hearken to what Carlo says. It’s worked for him, and it might work for you, if you only put it to use.

Substack as far as I know is free.

Most Valuable Email I know for sure is not free.

But at the moment, you can effectively get Most Valuable Email for free, as part of my Hogwarts of Influence event.

I’m bundling together a bunch of my offers, at various levels of craziness, meant to turn you into a persuasion wizard of greater and greater power.

Most Valuable Email is available at the “Snape” and “Dumbledore” levels, along with so many other bonuses to make any of the individual items effectively free.

If you’d like to find out more before this offer vanishes in a puff of magical smoke:

https://bejakovic.com/core-promise-pwyw/